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雅思口语高分答案的三个标准

2019-09-12编辑 : 津桥国际学院

郭宇欣

2015授课至今

什么样的回答才是真正的高分答案,考官更喜欢什么样的回答?这个问题并不是“仁者见仁,智者见智”能简单回答的。我们通过分析高分同学的经验可以发现,高分是有规律可循的。现在我们通过分析三组对比答案,找出区别,分析高分原因。

  什么样的回答才是真正的高分答案,考官更喜欢什么样的回答?这个问题并不是“仁者见仁,智者见智”能简单回答的。我们通过分析高分同学的经验可以发现,高分是有规律可循的。现在我们通过分析三组对比答案,找出区别,分析高分原因。

  Question: Could you describe your hometown please?

  Answer A: OK,I come from a small city. My city is very small, and you can even hardly find it on the map. But I love my hometown, because it’s quite beautiful. I’m proud of my hometown.

  Answer B: My hometown is Qufu in Shandong Province. It’s about 130 km south of my provincial capital Jinan. Qufu is not a geographically big place and with a relatively small urban population of seventy thousand. Known as the legendary birthplace of Confucius, my hometown enjoys great popularity as a famous tourism city.

  Answer A对家乡的描述过于概况,每句话都停留在表面,听者听完之后的感觉就是—毫无信息感。甚至都不知道考生家乡的名字。而Answer B首先清楚地告诉听者家乡的名字,地理信息,人口规模以及家乡的特别之处,让听者从各个角度来了解这个城市。因此,Answer B是非常的informative.

  Question: Do you think your hometown is a good place to live for young people?

  Answer A: Yes, you see, my hometown is Shanghai. It’s very developed and vibrant.

  Answer B: Yes, I do think so. My hometown is a very developed city which means there are more job chances and competitions. I believe young people can easily find jobs here. Besides, there are a lot of places of entertainment like the cinemas, pubs, theaters that cater to the young.

  Answer A认为上海适合年轻人居住,但是理由过于简单,就是“发达,有活力”。这样的高度概括性的答案符合中国人的思维习惯,答案背后是由很多的潜台词,发达代表经济好,经济好就意味着工作机会多,这样年轻人就有很多工作机会。同时,城市发达也说明这个城市有很多好玩的地方,这对于年轻人也是不可或缺的,也说明这个城市非常的有活力。中国人之间在交流的时候是能够主动理解这些潜台词,但是在英语交流的时候,这是很大的忌讳。西方人需要的答案中永远要有足够的细节。所以Answer B的胜出原因是因为足够的detailed。

  Question: Do you like eating fruits, why or why not?

  Answer A: Of course. I’m crazy about fruits, especially citrus fruits like oranges and lemons. They are sweet and sour, and very juicy.

  Answer B: Sure, I love fruits a lot, especially those juicy fruits. There are at least three reasons that I’m into fruits. Primarily, most of them are rich in vitamins, fiber and water. And these make me healthier. Furthermore, eating fruits can produce sensation of fullness easily, so it’s a good choice when I’m on diet. Last not least, fruits are really tasty.

  Answer A用举例的方式回答了“是否喜欢水果及其原因”这个问题,可以看出,答案简单而且缺乏逻辑。这个问题回答的重点是肯定或者否定,然后解释原因。Answer B的胜出并不是因为说得多,而是因为逻辑清晰正确,层次鲜明,说服力强。因此,Answer B的成功在于:答案非常的logical。

  综上几个高分答案,我们可以得出结论—真正的高分答案,一定要informative, detailed and logical.

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