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托福写作提分小细节

2019-11-12编辑 : 津桥国际学院

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2009年至今

随着托福考试改革变化,虽然写作部分并未发生太多改变,津桥国际学院的老师们收到很多同学们的邀请,从基础句型部分给大家分享一些句型的提分技巧。在上期讨论托福作文评分标准的部分讲解之后,本期主要针对我们独立写作部分进行讲解。

 

  随着托福考试改革变化,虽然写作部分并未发生太多改变,津桥国际学院的老师们收到很多同学们的邀请,从基础句型部分给大家分享一些句型的提分技巧。在上期讨论托福作文评分标准的部分讲解之后,本期主要针对我们独立写作部分进行讲解。

  高分细节

  句型多样化复杂化,在托福作文中,一般使用复合句,辅助并列句与并列复合句,也可以交替使用简单句,做到长短结合。 长句子表达复杂内容,短句子强调重要观点,特别是数个长句之后的短句更加简短有力。

  l 复合句的使用

  1.Even though I usually know what I have to say,I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

  2.This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

  3.Another reason is that to the extent we are able to increase and improve this skill we can definitely improve our chances for success.

  l 并列复合句

  1. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

  2. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.

  l 高分细节 ② 常见的标点符号的使用

  分号

  1.Today,many dragon images can be seen around China;they have been incorporated into everything from architecture to literature.

  2.People led more leisurely lives;housewives stayed home to run the house and did not have careers,Nowadays,one hardly know one’s neighbor,and can only manage an occasional nod if by some chance you meet.

  3.Every situation has so many variables that one individual’s experience may turn out to e quite different form another’s; therefore it can be argued that each person should make his or her own decisions in light of his or her unique circumstances.

  冒号 表示解释和说明

  1. The class will expose you to the following topics: politics,history,and economics.

  2. What we choose to wear every day reflects our mood and personality:dark,tailored clothing is sobering and bussinesslike,white bright,easy-fitting attire is playful and relaxing.

  3. Anyone who has done a job interview knows how important first impressions are :they dress nicely and practice their best manners,even though this may not be their normal behavior.

  破折号 表示解释和说明,不如冒号正式;破折号之后的部分可以是句子或者词组

  1. The public school system relies on students’ achieving certain results in order to proceed to a higher level-students must understand the material and pass examinations to demonstrate their mastery.

  2. When we think of history,there are few people we remember simply because they were rich.Overall,we remember people who did something with their lives-they were influential in politics,or contributed to science or art or religion.

  3. By wearing standard uniforms , people have the feeling of being part of a group working towards a common goal-the success of the company.

  总结

  通过以上词汇和句式的积累和汇总,相信参加托福的同学们对于推荐信的写作思路有一个初步的了解,接下来请关注津桥国际的网站和公众号了解后续的关于不同题材作文的讲解。

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